Autumn 2021- PPE learner response

 1) First, copy down the teacher's comments from your paper. Next, did you succeed in meeting or exceeding your target grade for GCSE Media? If not, how many additional marks do you need to achieve your target grade in this paper? Write this in a full answer. 

WWW-You are using media terminology (such as platform) accurately and you remember some of the media theories and attempt to apply them. you have also shown attempts to introduce the csp with a line of facts at the start of the answer which is good practice 

EBI- you do tend to repeat the same point (eg needle time) without enough in depth knowledge of what the terms mean. you need to engage with the question by always linking back to it and make sure you have revised csp facts to back up your answer. your written english also needs to be accurate(spag). 

My target grade is 6

My mark for this paper was 14

To achieve my target grade of a 6 , I would need to get 14 more marks

We don't know exactly what grade boundaries AQA will set in the real exams. These are the boundaries we've used (out of 40) 

7 = 32; 6 = 28; 5 = 24; 4 = 20; 3 = 16; 2 = 12; 1 = 8, u = below 8.. 

2) Write a question-by-question analysis of your performance. For each question, write how many marks you got from the number available and identify any points that you missed by carefully studying the 'possible content' part of the mark scheme:

1. 2 

2. 1 

3. 3

4. 3

5. 5

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